CELPIP Writing: Semi-formal Email Response
Your workplace pays for employees to attend relevant training courses. You would like to attend a specific course.
Write to your supervisor and request to attend the course:
• Describe the situation
• Explain the details of the training course
• Suggest how the course will help you.
Dear Mr. Ross,
I am writing to you today because I would like to take an accounting class at the University of Toronto. This is a 6-week course where I can further my skills, which will help me assist our clients in more ways.
This accounting class offers innovative ways to integrate computer software into our present computer system without any risk of data loss or security breach possibility. Further, it includes managerial settings that will allow me to meet our client’s needs, assuring them that our investment strategies can adjust to market trends. I have enclosed detailed information about this course in this letter.
I would appreciate it if someone could review the included information. The course will be beneficial for my professional development, and I can also network with industry professionals that rank with our company’s business level. I am confident that the course will benefit my ability to manage our clients with differing accounting strategies.
Yours sincerely,
Britany Marsh
Purpose: I am writing to you today because I would like to take an accounting class at the University of Toronto. This is a 6-week course where I can further my skills, which will help me assist our clients in more ways.
Detail: This accounting class offers innovative ways to integrate computer software into our present computer system without any risk of data loss or security breach possibility. Further, it includes managerial settings that will allow me to meet our client’s needs, assuring them that our investment strategies can adjust to market trends. I have enclosed detailed information about this course in this letter.
Outcome: I would appreciate it if someone could review the included information. The course will be beneficial for my professional development, and I can also network with industry professionals that rank at our company’s business level. I am confident that the course will benefit my ability to manage our clients with differing accounting strategies.
Yours sincerely,
Britany Marsh
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